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These are excellent!
Visual 1 is very easy to understand.
All four of these together tell the story of how excess weight is a stroke risk.
Visual 2 takes a tricky subject, BMI, and simplifies the terminology.
Visual 3 gives a plan of action for reducing obesity by “small changes.” This is hopeful and helpful, as people get discouraged easily when they think they have to change everything all at once.
Visual 4 is my favorite! This is a very clear representation of the “hidden stroke risk” associated with excess weight and obesity.
Very well done and very clear!Hello and thanks for the opportunity to review. This looks great. Please see my comments below with my suggestions:
Visual #1 – Would change the “Lower risk for stroke tomorrow” with an increase sense of urgency to “lower the risk of stroke today!”
Visual #2 – Although I agree with emphasizing the midline/ obesity as the most dangerous when considering BMI; I don’t agree with using BMI as it is not the most comprehensive index for health since it doesn’t distinguish between lean muscle mass and fat mass. Most clinicians are de-emphasizing BMI as it also doesn’t distinguish between age, sex and race
Visual #3 – the dominoes in the image conveys the cascade effect which is very fitting for the messaging here. and the targeted key points: Focus on progress not perfection, small choices today, better health tomorrow. However, if this is intended for the community; most people don’t know what nutrient dense food is, what is really portion control is, also the importance of less stress with increases inflammation an contributes to cortisol release and midline obesity, and sleep. I would replace the dominoes with a more comprehensive image.
Visual #4 – Very powerful and perfect image.Hello and thanks for the opportunity to review. This looks great. Please see my comments below with my suggestions:
Visual #1 – Would change the “Lower risk for stroke tomorrow” with an increase sense of urgency to “lower the risk of stroke today!”
Visual #2 – Although I agree with emphasizing the midline/ obesity as the most dangerous when considering BMI; I don’t agree with using BMI as it is not the most comprehensive index for health since it doesn’t distinguish between lean muscle mass and fat mass. Most clinicians are de-emphasizing BMI as it also doesn’t distinguish between age, sex and race
Visual #3 – the dominoes in the image conveys the cascade effect which is very fitting for the messaging here. and the targeted key points: Focus on progress not perfection, small choices today, better health tomorrow. However, if this is intended for the community; most people don’t know what nutrient dense food is, what is really portion control is, also the importance of less stress with increases inflammation an contributes to cortisol release and midline obesity, and sleep. I would replace the dominoes with a more comprehensive image.
Visual #4 – Very powerful and perfect image.
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